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The underlying force driving Natural selection is in mathematics.[edit]
“Pressure” is a key word when we talk about evolution.
And it took me a long time to figure out what natural law is meant by "pressure".
“Probability” should have a prominent role in the “Natural Selection” article.
I propose to start the article as follows:
Natural selection is the probabilistically pressured selection of individual survival and reproduction due to differences in phenotype. It is a key mechanism of evolution, the change in the heritable traits characteristic of a population over generations. Charles Darwin popularised the term "natural selection", contrasting it with artificial selection, which in his view is intentional, whereas natural selection is not. Formatcells (talk) 00:53, 15 February 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Thank you for your ideas. However, the lead section is just a summary of the article. It is not a place to introduce 'new' ideas. Actually, Wikipedia is not a place for new ideas either. That is called "original research" and it is forbidden here. The ideas in the article are cited to reliable sources, and the lead then summarizes the resulting description, i.e. the order is sources - main text - lead. Best we leave it alone. Chiswick Chap (talk) 04:22, 15 February 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I'm not sure this is WP:OR. The article does use the phrase probability of surviving to adulthood. @Formatcells: Do any sources say probabilistic in their definitions? Invasive Spices (talk) 21:21, 19 February 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Um, well it sure looks like it. Proposing to rewrite the lead of a mature and formally-reviewed article without having first contributed new sources is certainly an odd thing to do, and looks very much like putting the OR-cart before the RS-horse. The lead has been developed over many years by multiple editors, based on the cited text in the body of the article, which is in turn based on a wealth of evidence. As such it is probably best left alone unless there is pressing reason, supported by new sources, or an obvious mistake in summarising the article body. Chiswick Chap (talk) 22:12, 19 February 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]