The game is pretty good, the v0.1 it's longer than I expected to be too. The typo is good in general but there are some big mistakes with words in two scenes.
Scenery issues:
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The school hall
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Julie's bed
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"bg stang"
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Sim rig
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"bg kitchen"
And finally, the last and most important one "We somehow ended up holding each other" scene, I really need to see it, badly. Some characters will need to get their own design, Bert for example, he is the third character introduced in this story, it would be cool if that happens, the game will improve in that aspect.
Finally, I loved the first minutes, the game provides us with a good introduction to our MC and the other characters, we know what the story is about (at least I think that) and the dialogues are quite good but definitely could be a lot better.
I can't wait for more updates, hope to hear more about the game soon!